Treasure-hunt Descriptive writing Dalo

1. How different is descriptive writing from narrative writing? 

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Descriptive writing is the ability to describe something convincingly will serve a writer well in any kind of essay situation. 

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Narrative writing is composition appeals to one of humankind's basic instincts, the impulse to share stories. Sometimes the aim of the story-teller is simply to entertain, to provide a moment of escape from the business of the day or the horrors of the night, but sometimes the aim of the story-teller is to instruct, to help others in their understanding of something.

2. How does the maxim “Show, don’t tell” explain how one writes descriptively.

     Illustrate with your own example. 

> You need to consider the right maxim. 

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Okay, I get it,” you’re thinking. “But how do I do it? How do I bring more ‘showing’ into my writing?”

3. How do you as a writer make your language descriptive? How do you add depth and

     texture to a piece of writing? 

>In order for readers to fully experience what I write about, they need to be able to see, hear, taste, smell and touch the world around them. Try to use language that incorporates several senses, not just sight.A simile is a comparison of two unlike things, typically marked by use of "like", "as" or "than.” 

4. Other than one word modifiers, what other modifiers maybe employed in descriptive

     writing?

 > Other modifier of this are adjectives, adverbs, noun, relative, and prepositional

#9 Definition of Discipline, Accountability, Maturity

1. Discipline- discipline is the bridge between goals and accomplishments.               
                 
*First we form habits, then they form us.Conquer your bad habits or they conquer you, it is better to conquer yourself than to win a thousand battles. Then the victory is yours. It cannot be taken from you, not by angels or by demons, heaven or hell. In reading the lives of great men, I found that the first victory they won was over themselves, self-discipline with all of them came first.                     
                                                                    
 2.Accountability- an obligation or willingness to accept responsibility.                     
                                
 *God gave burdens also shoulders. When a man points a finger at someone else, he should remember that four of his fingers are pointing at himself. If you let other do it for you, they do it to you.                  
                               
 3.Maturity- is a psychological term used to indicate how a person responds to the circumstances or environment in an appropriate manner.    
                
 *Maturity begins to grow when you can sense your concern for others or weighing your concern for yourself.

#8 The Road Not Taken

 Many years ago, when the word was young, people were allowed to ask God to make them what they were not.           
 Cherry sat in the shade and decided to petition God to make her a Queen. For she noted how powerful any queen was. She had dominion over everyone, and her every wish was obeyed without question. So cherry became a queen.        
For a few weeks it was fun to be so powerful. But she noticed that as a queen she still had to go under a shade when the sun was out.                
 She decided to become the sun as it seemed more powerful than the queen. Thus it came to pass by God's grace.Very quickly she noticed that the clouds obstructed the sun; it must therefore be more powerful. She decided to become a cloud.                  
But when the cloud turned into rain, she wanted to become raindrops. She saw that the drops fell on the stone and decided to become one. Immediately, she saw that the stone cutter had power over the stone, cutting it into the shape mason wanted.                
 Thus, discovering that stone cutter was the most powerful of all, she realized that was her all the while.                  
                                                                                             
                                                              The End... :)

my mission: Best Motivational video ever

my mission: Best Motivational video ever


1.What is the main message of the video?

*The main message of the video is nothing starts easy in this word. Everything begins at some level of difficulty. Even waking up requires certain efforts but one thing beautiful about life is the fact that is most difficult is also the most rewarding and the most satisfying so don't give up.
2. Are you inspired by it? why or why not?

*Yes, because I know in life there's a pain, there's a sadness, there's a trials, and also a losers, but in all of this thing I learn to forgive others, and most of all I learn to value my life and learn to accept circumstances in life.

3.How can you become an inspiration for others too?

* I want them to realize how beautiful life is and how lucky all of us that we are given a chance to walk through our dream. So commend rather than criticize other and persist rather than quit, accept all circumstances and trials in life to survive.

Best Motivational video ever

#7 My Hero

"Success is not the key to happiness.Happiness is the key to success.If you love what are you doing you will be successful."                                                                                                                                             
            
 We all know and understand the word Hero is a person had a ability to fly and had a power to save and help those people who need them. But all of this is just a fantasy and never happen in reality. But still there's a real person in real life that we can consider as a hero. Except for god, my family, my love once's and my mentors there is a person that I can consider as my hero. Even though I never mate and never at once see him in person. But still I can say he is a real hero and that is Efren Penaflorida a Pushcart Educator who help those street children to experience how it feels to be studied even though they don't have a chance to go to school everyday, because there parents can't sent them in a public school. That's why I'm glad that there are still a person like him who want to help teach and give a opportunity to those children to learn.                                           
  And it makes him happy pushing a cart to every street they passed by. Because he believe that every cause of his sweat is the equivalent of the children that have a opportunity to learn how to read and write. And it is nice that he love to teach those street children without condition, give food without reason, and care without expectation.

#6 My Comment

As I read the experience of Fe Jane Augusto nothing exist in my mind.Although I enjoy it because I never experience that kind of event as a whole;there's a great impact to me.